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This is the first part of an upcoming motion comic Metal Whisper, written by BrokenTales, with artwork by CrimsonMagpie, and powered by MadeFire.

When it's completed, the full story with be published on deviantART to be read for free, so watch this space.

Decades after the apocalypse, the last pockets of humanity are struggling to survive in the wasteland that remains, but humanity wasn't the only species to survive. Walking Metal - the thinking machines that waged war until the world was in ruin - wander the wastes, still programmed to seek and destroy.

But a stranger claims to be able to talk to the Metal, perhaps even control it, and just in time to protect the town and its citizens.
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:iconwetcorps:
wetcorps Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'll read it.
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:iconbrokentales:
BrokenTales Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2014   Writer
:thumbsup:
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:iconcaine001:
Caine001 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Cool!
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:iconwhiteknightofchaos:
Whiteknightofchaos Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Amazing work.
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:iconbrokentales:
BrokenTales Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014   Writer
Thanks :)
Do you have a favourite character so far?
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:iconwhiteknightofchaos:
Whiteknightofchaos Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your welcome. No not yet.
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:iconliamsharp:
LiamSharp Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2014  Professional Artist
So good. Love it. :-)
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:iconbrokentales:
BrokenTales Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014   Writer
Thanks. :)
It's been good fun putting it all together.
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:iconliamsharp:
LiamSharp Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2014  Professional Artist
Glad to hear it! :-)
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:iconthewalkingmike:
TheWalkingMike Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Love it!
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:iconbrokentales:
BrokenTales Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014   Writer
Thanks :)
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:iconskysongma:
SkysongMA Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2014  Student Writer
Awesome!
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:iconmalanotte:
malanotte Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014   Artist
I like it a lot!!!
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:iconclover-circe:
CLOVER-CIRCE Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
woooooooooooooh!!! Love your art :3
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:iconbrokentales:
BrokenTales Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014   Writer
Glad to hear, but CrimsonMagpie was the artist on this project. Check out his gallery to see some additional, uncropped artwork. :)
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:iconneurotype:
neurotype Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ooooh I am impressed at the incorporation of motion here. The pacing is awesome!
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:iconbrokentales:
BrokenTales Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014   Writer
That's great to hear, because the pacing took some fine tuning to get right. :)
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:iconneurotype:
neurotype Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Worth it!
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:iconcrimsonmagpie:
CrimsonMagpie Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
I do love what you've done with the pacing, movement, music, etc... not to mention your excellent writing! :la:
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:iconbrokentales:
BrokenTales Featured By Owner May 25, 2014   Writer
I have no idea 
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:iconcrimsonmagpie:
CrimsonMagpie Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
I think that's a very common feeling amongst us creative types. :p
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:iconudjatalhazred:
UdjatAlHazred Featured By Owner May 24, 2014
GREAT work! I enjoyed it
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:iconbrokentales:
BrokenTales Featured By Owner May 24, 2014   Writer
Glad to hear. :)
Your profile mentions a comic in development - how's that coming along?
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:iconudjatalhazred:
UdjatAlHazred Featured By Owner May 25, 2014
Hey, thanks for asking. It's not going very well. At the moment I'm trying to develop the characters, but I'm not very pleased with my creations, yet. In addition this is my first try to make a comic and I still have to find out the way of doing it =D .
It will never be as good as yours, and I hope there will come more of the Metal Whisper.
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:iconbrokentales:
BrokenTales Featured By Owner May 25, 2014   Writer
You learn a lot in your first few attempts. :) My first script was atrocious :crying:
You're writing the script and doing the art I take it?
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:iconudjatalhazred:
UdjatAlHazred Featured By Owner May 26, 2014
Well somehow both at the same time. I changed the skript twice now. But I think the beginning is as important as the end will be ^-^ . The basic characters are done, its more the look I try to work out.
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:iconbrokentales:
BrokenTales Featured By Owner May 26, 2014   Writer
Keep going, and best of luck with it. :thumbsup:
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:iconudjatalhazred:
UdjatAlHazred Featured By Owner May 27, 2014
Thanks a lot. Hope you will look at it when it's done and give me your opinion.
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:iconbrokentales:
BrokenTales Featured By Owner May 27, 2014   Writer
Feel free to send me a link :)
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:icon3ihard:
3ihard Featured By Owner May 24, 2014   Digital Artist
awesome!
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:iconderveniotis:
Derveniotis Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Professional Artist
Very very promising!
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:iconbrokentales:
BrokenTales Featured By Owner May 23, 2014   Writer
Keep an eye out for the full version :)
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:iconpaulv3design:
PaulV3Design Featured By Owner May 21, 2014   Digital Artist
Looking forward to it. Nice work!
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:iconbrokentales:
BrokenTales Featured By Owner May 23, 2014   Writer
Thanks :)
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:iconpaulv3design:
PaulV3Design Featured By Owner May 28, 2014   Digital Artist
You're welcome. ;)
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:iconjoeotiscostello:
JoeOtisCostello Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
BTW, if you don't know yet how to make page thumbnails, we just added a quick article in tips and tricks:  kb.madefire.com/hc/en-us/artic…
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:iconbrokentales:
BrokenTales Featured By Owner May 21, 2014   Writer
I did not know that - thank you. It will go on the list of things that need sorting for the full version. :)
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:iconjoeotiscostello:
JoeOtisCostello Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Awesome Job!  Can't wait to see the whole thing!
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:iconbrokentales:
BrokenTales Featured By Owner May 20, 2014   Writer
We're working on it. :thumbsup:
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:iconkqbuckley:
Kqbuckley Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Great Work! Amazing Job!
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:iconbrokentales:
BrokenTales Featured By Owner May 20, 2014   Writer
Thanks :)
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:iconmadefirestudios:
MadefireStudios Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Professional Artist
This is REALLY impressive. Great flow through the whole piece and the sound is killer. Really nice work!! 
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:iconbrokentales:
BrokenTales Featured By Owner May 19, 2014   Writer
Thanks for the support. It's been good fun playing with the Madefire tool - lots of "I wonder if I can do this" moments.
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:iconsleyf:
Sleyf Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh my!  I want to read more!  This is such an interesting concept, and honestly I'd be afraid of that metal too...I didn't expect the ending :clap:
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:iconbrokentales:
BrokenTales Featured By Owner May 19, 2014   Writer
It might take a little while, but there will be more to come. :)
Thanks for the support.
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:iconsleyf:
Sleyf Featured By Owner May 20, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well it'll be worth the wait, and honestly it's really professional so that takes time!
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:iconbrokentales:
BrokenTales Featured By Owner May 21, 2014   Writer
The feedback we've had so far is encouraging. :)
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:iconsleyf:
Sleyf Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:thumbsup: keep it up, you now have people waiting for the next chapter!
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:iconiggy-design:
Iggy-design Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Professional General Artist
This is amazing,very nice concept!
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:iconbrokentales:
BrokenTales Featured By Owner May 18, 2014   Writer
Glad to hear - cheers :)
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